It had to be that day,that day of all days something terrible and scary happend on that day i asked myself why me, why now, why this.Its not like is happend to someone before or its a normal thing but i wasn’t, it made me think in every way and form but still no answere and this is how it all started.
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February 10, 2015 at 10:31 am
Marley –
You have withheld information effectively from the reader to create mystery. I love the repeated “why” questions, they work brilliantly.
You might want to go over this and fix some of the spelling and punctuation. We usually leave a space after a full stop.
May 6, 2015 at 8:24 pm
Thank you, for the feedback